That lines two, three, one and four rhyme
seems strange and rather more like prose.
The constraints keep the meter close,
let meaning float beneath the lines.
-Lynne
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the crafty sisters 
Nice poem and a poetic form. Love the near rhyme of 1 and 4.
Thank you. The form is an envelope stanza where lines 1 and 4 rhyme and lines 2 and 3. I like poetry without rhyme but I needed something structured if I was going to try a project 365. I compromised and am satisfied with slant and near rhymes.