What a Cat! Alexander Calder!
-Cheri
I yearn for the colorless light, bright, bright until beatific. Time to muse my life’s specifics, gentle ease into that good night. -Lynne
I like words’ sound more than meaning, but quatrains are not just rhythms. Poetry’s sense shines through prisms, split light makes colors for yearning. -Lynne
-Cheri
The fourth line’s “murdered” changed the rhyme and moved the meaning fast forward. What lines am I moving toward, with more regard for sound than time? -Lynne
-Cheri
The un-sweet iced tea I ordered, was too bitter for a burger. These lines are boring this herder, change lanes use the near rhyme “murdered.” -Lynne
None of the joes appeal to me, if you want coffee I don’t care. Just don’t glare at me with your stare, when I order un-sweet iced tea. -Lynne